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Days into years, I have wasted too much time locked away in pains delight, an innocent soul now lost

Into the wonders of dreams, only now a dying specter enveloped in the mists of phantoms light, tucked

Away to succumb to the shadows, which haunts my soul in this weary dimension, why do you torment

Me now as I am but asleep, but oh how your unsoundness of fun, has turned to mere insanity, which in

Time I am sure will haunt you, and come to remember me, for you have cut off my hopes and dreams,

For I will invade your dreams, can you but open your eyes and see that you have closed a door that will

Never open, for I am gone and shall never return….
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arsenic-sea Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lovely :blackrose:
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Lilimeitys Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you:hug:
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arsenic-sea Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you are most welcome
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ShirleyWade Apr 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
awwww... this is kinda sad but I like itt!! :iconweekenddanceplz:
The final is... a bit cheerer, isn't it? Or maybe I misunderstood it :iconsweatplz:
:) Anyways, good job!
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Lilimeitys Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yay it was a bit sad for all of it, especially the last part but thanks soo much for you're comment I appreciate it:huggle:
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ShirleyWade Apr 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh! So, it's sad :) Nah, poems can be really sad as stories~
I can like sad poems though :o hahaha :)
And you're welcome, one day, when I have more time, I will try to sneak a peek on your gallery ^^
I love comments too ^^
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Lilimeitys Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha take you're time, yea ha you're not the only one I like sad stories too=( yessss everytime I see a comment I get all excited:excited:
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ShirleyWade Apr 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
oh yeah... Well, I also like happy ones, but I like the mix, you know? :)
hahahah, oh yeah! Comments always makes you happy :3
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Lilimeitys Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:dance:Yea I know what you mean, always good to have a variety of what you like:clap: I also love horror another one of my favs to read:reading:
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ShirleyWade Apr 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, I love variety *O* :iconweekenddanceplz:
Horror? Wow! I like the mystery of horror stories :) They're always so suspenseful...
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