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Open in the mists of distant
Presence, one, two, three
Enticed to feel reborn again….

Whole bottle at a glance
Just a waste of flesh,waiting
To pass over,a figment to blind
The soul,to sudden death…..

Befalling,remaining,suffocating
The remnants of the prolonging
Immortal soul……

Painfully enslaved, all tied up
Through the hands of the doer,
Just rolling around in the merciless
Depths of the mind…….
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Pillsby Lilimeitys

Literature / Poetry / Horror / Free Verse©2013-2014 Lilimeitys
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AngelicIceShadow Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
I...no words...just wow
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Lilimeitys Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp:
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AngelicIceShadow Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
HUGS O.O
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ackpack34 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Photographer
Painfully enslaved, all tied up
Through the hands of the doer,
Just rolling around in the merciless
Depths of the mind…….

I think that describes what addiction is VERY, VERY well!
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eyesofsnowleopard Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sad and intense but lovely words
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Lilimeitys Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I thank you for your kind words:huggle:
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eyesofsnowleopard Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i always express what i feel :tighthug:
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angellove94 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013   Writer
:'( </3 make me think how much i acuttly try to kill myself with a bottle of pills </3
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Lilimeitys Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww hun:cling:
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angellove94 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013   Writer
:(
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