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Why do we seek to
Find love and fall under
Its spell, when love is
Just a suicide, waiting
For its next moment to
Strike you down…..

Feelings so precious
Then can fade to sudden
Darkness, just for one’s
Pursuit of momentary
Happiness…..

Love is everlasting
How can that be
Said is that really
A devoted promise
To tell….

Love is a scandal,
Can cut like a knife
Can just cause a
Person to run and hide…..
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Love is a suicideby Lilimeitys

Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Concrete Poetry©2013-2014 Lilimeitys
(Please do not re-post or copy without letting me know....)
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AngelicIceShadow Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
This sounds like a heartbreak poem because this is usually how someone feels when they go through heart break, knowing I'm one of them, I can really understand this poem it feels like I could relate
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Lilimeitys Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yea it makes me wonder about love between another cause in an instant it can go away like that and then your left just shattered=(...but Im glad you like it=D
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AngelicIceShadow Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
Trust me I am cautious about love as well because some are afraid to love because they don't want to get hurt. It is true that you could love someone and then they just leave...like its nothing ;__; trust me I know the feeling my friend
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Lilimeitys Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yea:ashamed: Im one of those people who are afraid to love I have to say so myself...Ive had my heart broken so many times and love is just something lost in the depths of my heart, but Im glad to know someone understands how I feel:}
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AngelicIceShadow Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
Awwe :iconbutbutwhyplz: blarg you are just made of huggableness. If you everyone want someone to talk to then I am here for you :( promise!!
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Lilimeitys Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
HahaxD huggableness:giggle: Aww thankies very much:huggle: that means alot:happycry:
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AngelicIceShadow Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
:glomp: yesh I love huggles and of course anytime ^-^ I won't let you down that is for sure
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Lilimeitys Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013   Writer
i rele like this one
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Lilimeitys Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, Im glad you like it:aww:
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