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Twas the night I fell from the sky, as if a white dove secluded from its feathers, such grace was lost

To hold such a token of solitude together, no more to be pure but a relic of distilled euphoric elegance,

With a corrupted lineage which can only make one filled with deception, no more to look back to see

What was left behind, but now disregarded as a darkened outcaster fallen on the ground....
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Fallen Passionby Lilimeitys

Scraps©2013-2014 Lilimeitys
Hope you enjoy!!!!
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013   Writer
your writting is an addiction of mine its just perfect the words and gahh
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taichitwo Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your use of words is , quite precise , and original .:star: revamp 
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akkajess Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Writer
Congrats on your DLD! :heart: :winner:
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Lilimeitys Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you:bow::hug:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: dailylitdeviations.deviantart.…

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.

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Lilimeitys Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow thank you so much:winner:
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Moon-cha Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*shivers* I think this is amazingly done~
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Lilimeitys Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hihihi:dummy: merci
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DesignbyDavis Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Im really bad at critiquing written works of art, but I do really like this one. Good choices of words and the flow really nice together. 
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Porcelain-Grace Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
so beautiful:iconawwwplz:
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